"[@1yq] Thank you very much!..."

https://arbital.com/p/4gc

by Mark Chimes Jun 16 2016


Eric Bruylant Thank you very much! just to be clear, are you talking about the 'clickbait', the intro paragraph in the text itself, or both?

Feel free to suggest / make your own changes if you have anything specific in mind by the way.


Comments

Eric Bruylant

The intro paragraph, the clickbait seems fine.